Remembering Wistfully Purple Sunsets

In response to prompt here: readwritepoem

The rigid wave pattern
On the red wrapping paper
Renounced white plainness.
Me reminded while plaintively
Rocking with papoose of mine
Of redwoods, water, pines,
Many yesterdays ago.
Reality: white porches
Now, and rude walled palazzos.

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5 Comments

  1. I love the way you’ve used the RWP acronyms throughout your poem … Brilliant!

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  2. rallentanda

     /  April 2, 2010

    Excellent poem

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  3. jessiecarty

     /  April 3, 2010

    my favorite part- reality: white porches 🙂

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  4. Rob

     /  April 5, 2010

    indeed great acronym use and I enjoy where this takes me…nice visuals…

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