Eclipsed

I’ve eaten too many moon
pies from the puddles
we romped in before
I knew eclipses were possible
and would leave me hungry for days

(a little moon poem for toads http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/02/and-moon-micro-poetry.html )

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5 Comments

  1. So witty and fun!

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  2. This is so clever!

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  3. Rosemary Nissen-Wade

     /  February 20, 2017

    I love it.

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  4. sanaarizvi

     /  February 20, 2017

    Delightful!❤️

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  5. Kerry O'Connor

     /  February 20, 2017

    Wonderful! i love the pace you achieved by writing the whole poem in a single sentence.

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